the drop

The line was just as large as my fear my stomach clogged My throat as the line grew shorter then it got to 

The point that i could hear the count down “5 4 3 2 1”

Whoosh! I saw all of them plummet with no fear. 

“Wow” i said aloud

After that it felt like i was slowly chewing bricks then 

The time had come i quickly sat down put the 

Safety on then it started to go up

My fear had overcome me then drop my body felt like

I was going up but i knew i was going down then i

Look down then my mind exploded.

Everyone got off the ride because they were mortified

But i stayed on because i wanted to go again but little did 

I know this time was going to be extremely terrifying.   

while writing this true story i felt open and glad to talk about this story
the thing i learned after. what enjoyed was editing because next time i could get it
right what i found hard on the other hand was staying focus
and not talking to my friends.